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GOOD POINTS:
· Creates a good atmosphere
· Stays intense
· Both characters were shady and are kept anonymous. Keeps audience on their seat and wants them to know
· Black and white creates an interesting effect
IMPROVEMENTS:
· Music too intense
· Cuts are too jumpy in certain places
· Sound effect when the match was thrown in the house was too dramatic for what happened
· Conversation at the end needed to be more audible